Thursday, May 16, 2013

The Elements-Prologue


Prologue

 
“Be careful with that, foolish child!”

Cato winced and then glanced momentarily at his father before he continued. “The stone appears to be encoded…if I could just…” he twisted the top, but a little too quickly. The intricate engravings that snaked around and up the stoned container began to glow a brilliant blue and Cato’s father knew exactly what that meant. Cato also knew…it meant he had failed. He could feel his father’s rage seeping through the air, coating him and his siblings around him with a blanket of fury.

The blue mist seemed to whip and curl out of the celestial stone that was once its home. He tried to grab at it, but knew there was no use. If the element was extracted incorrectly, it would escape and be given a new and unknown structure to inhabit. That structure was always extremely difficult to locate. In fact, it had taken over one hundred years to find the one he just screwed up.

“Cato, just go!” his brother called to him. “Begin your search again and do not return until you have possession of the element.”

Cato hated that his father favored his oldest brother over him. It was as if he couldn’t do anything right. He gave a quick bow of his head and took off, trying to get away from his father as quickly as possible. “I will not fail you father.” It was the last thing he said before disappearing into the darkness.

“You just did,” his father growled in anger as he began to pace, fuming more and more with each step he took. After coming to an abrupt halt with his wife at his side, he turned to his remaining six children. Sage began to sit at her throne, gathering her burgundy gown and sweeping it to the side with all the grace of a queen, before settling in the onyx chair. She was, hands down, the only thing that could calm the king in any way. Their father acknowledged her with a glance and then turned his attention back to his children. “Your brother has failed me,” he began, his tone harsh and unforgiving.

“This is a very delicate and tedious process my love,” their mother interjected. She never stopped giving her opinion, no matter how intimidating their father was, he didn’t seem to faze her the same way he did everyone else. “Cato is a good son, he does what you ask of him and I will not have your unrealistic expectations be a reason for severe punishment.” By severe punishment, she meant the whip of fire. It was just what the name implied.   

“Woman!” He turned to her slowly and their eyes met. She held his stare and did not relent in her gaze. She was the only one that could do that as well. His returning glare was always menacing and cold. It would make anyone else want to hide inside themselves and disappear. “These children of ours need to understand all that I-”

“Hush now!” She stood to her feet and their father’s lips pressed into a thin line as he glared at his wife. “This is ridiculous. The longer you keep them here, the longer it will take them to find the rest of the elements again. If the pretty little containers are not here, how can you destroy them, hmm?”

“You speak too boldly.” He barked.

“Too boldly? Ha!” The Queen waved her hand in the air as if she were shooing a fly away. She made her way back to her husband’s side to address their children together. Her raven black hair looked like blackened flames surrounding her delicate looking face. She walked with such grace it was as if she were floating, her gown rippling like liquid against the stone floor beneath her.

The remaining six children took a knee in the presence of their mother and father standing together before them. Their mother had full lips, the color of a deep red rose and her cat-like eyes had a smoldering black look to them that intimidated the strongest of men. She looked at her husband fiercely and everyone knew she would have the final say today. “I say what I want, when I want my love.” She spoke calmly and tilted her head to the side watching her husband struggle to harness his tongue. “I will not be controlled by you or any other…it is why I am your queen, is it not?” She lifted her chin and waited for a response.

“But we are stuck here…bound to this land until they,” he thrust his hand out gesturing towards their children, “decide to do what is asked of them.” They could all hear his struggle in maintaining control of himself.

“And they will.”

Their father rolled his eyes, an inherent trait. “How many opportunities do they need to fail me? I tell them, find the element, bring me the element and I will destroy it.” His voice began to gradually elevate. “I am thorough when I explain the process and they all know that if the celestial containers which preserve the elements are not…opened correctly, the element itself escapes to some other place and I must begin at square one again! I should have done it myself. I told you, let me do it and you insisted they learn something by doing it themselves, well look where that has gotten us!”

“Not so they would learn. You know that they must be the ones to destroy the element they find my love. You cannot do it for any of them, no matter how much you may want to.”

“But I will succeed!”

“Impossible!” Both of their onyx colored eyes flashed with flames of anger.

“Their lack of completion is unacceptable; maybe they need a better reason to renew their determination to complete their task at hand!”

Their mother didn’t even flinch, but she turned her attention to them and again spoke calmly. “Did you hear that my children?” They each began to nod slowly. “Your father and I are very disappointed. You have all been searching for a very long time and what do we have to show for it my loves? All of the elements, yet again, out there waiting to be destroyed during the Annular eclipse…now I understand when you are here, you are not there,” she pointed towards outside. “I also know if you are not out there, you are not able to search, the way we so desperately need you to…do you understand?”

“Yes mother,” they called out in unison.

“Now then, it has taken a very long time for this entire search-and-destroy mission and I am growing tired of your father not having what he wants. I can only protect you from his wrath for so long…not only is this powerful being your father, but he is also king, you all have a duty to please both.”

They each began to rise slowly to their feet in anticipation of the lecture coming to a close. “Go now my children-locate the elements so that we may destroy them and expand our kingdom to its rightful size…bigger, than anyone else’s. Do not disappoint me.” A wicked grin curled their mother’s lips upward and they bowed obediently to her before leaving to search their territories tirelessly until they could bring her what she wanted.

“It will be done,” they heard her saying to their father in the distance. The oldest glanced back at them over his shoulder, in time to see his father reward her with a lustful kiss. He averted his eyes forward and ran with the others until they were out of sight.

 

 

Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Man Speak

Heard that term before? Isn't it crazy how differently men and women tell stories...or rather, recall events? As a writer, I tend to be very descriptive when telling a story or going over anything interesting that happened to me that day. Add that to being a woman and in addition to being far too descriptive, I am also told I am long-winded. Hah! Alright then, that's fine, I can only smile at one of many differences between men and women and embrace my womanly uniqueness!
I've composed 3 short stories, told from the perspective of a woman. Are there any men out there who would care or dare to comment the "male" version of any of them? Ladies...please feel free to post your answers the exact way you would answer these questions if asked. Should be fun to read your stories!

1. So how was your day, should we go out tonight?


"Oh my gosh, it was crazy! So when I first got up, I was having one of those weird puffy face days, you know, the kind that can't be covered with make-up? It sucked! So I had to change my whole outfit to a darker color scheme to try and disguise my fat-face issues. Then I had to change the shoes to go with it. I totally wanted to wear my brown bootie's I had gotten from Macy's, the one's with the mini-gold buckles, but I had to wear the long boots, the black pair I got from Payless with the silver buckle because I couldn't find both booties... Anyway, the outfit was mostly black so I couldn't do the booties anymore anyway. So I started off being totally frustrated before I even got to work!
"Okay, I get to work and the ONE DAY hot Mike even looks in my direction I look like a dumpster-diving, rat-haired frickin' mismatching idiot! had to wear my black-pants suit and it was supposed to be 87-degrees, if I didn't mention that already. Then my face makes me look like a chipette who's storing her nuts for the winter in my cheeks and when he waved at me, oh Gawsh, I wanted to pass out! Instead, I decide I'm going to play it cool right, because I've been reading that one book, How To Snag a Guy in 10 Days so I go to lean against the wall near the vending machine so I can casually wiggle my fingers back at him, a gesture that would acknowledge him but not look desperate, and I miss! The wall! I missed and leaned right over into the floor! I mean thank goodness I was wearing pants at that moment because my feet were in the air solidifying my "I'm-the-worlds-biggest-idiot" look! I don't think the guy is EVER going to give me a second glance now. It's all so stupid, it's like whatever could go wrong did!
"I made my way back to my desk like a conquered animal, I didn't even get my fruit bar from the vending machine, all I had was my sat-over-night-half-gone Coke can sitting there and I really didn't care, so I take a swig and I don't know what I swallowed, but it wasn't pure liquid...I don't even want to think about it, but it was a tiny chunk of nastiness that is now floating around in my stomach. What if it was a fly? Can I die from swallowing a fly? I read once that every time a fly lands on ANYTHING, it throws up. Do you think it landed on my Coke, threw up and fell in? That would mean I swallowed a fly and poopy throw-up since that's what they eat!
After all that, I had to wait until the end of the day to get my paycheck, which is never enough as you know and I get home and Sparky chewed up my Macy's bootie!!!! Those things were like $200, so now, even when I do find the other one, I can't stinking wear the things! My highlights are dull, my tan is faded, my mani-pedi is looking a little rough and my best shoes are trashed. If we did go out tonight, the only kind of hot I will be is a hot mess and I just can't handle that right now! How about...how about next week when I can take care of myself and get my puffer-fish face under control? I mean, look, it's like a bee sting me or something?! Why is my life so complicated?!"

2. What did you eat for lunch today?


"Well, first I have to say, I was craving pasta like no other but being that we only get a 30 minute break and all the good pasta spots are sit down restaurants I had to settle for some Jack In the Box. So I'm thinking I can run in, grab a few $1 tacos and leave with enough time to get back to the job and actually eat the dang things. Did that happen? Of course not! First of all, the drive-thru line is ridiculous and that's fine since I planned on going in anyway. I get in there and I'm thinking, nice, there's only two people in front of me. So, it's my turn...I order my tacos and I'm waiting with the rest of the people who were in front of me and people start trickling in from outside talking about how their orders from the drive-thru were wrong, or cold or whatever and the guy keeps helping them, one after another, while the people who came inside in the first place are still standing there waiting! I had to say something of course, but he just acted like whatever, it's not my lunch break. I was so pi-assed the when I finally got my order, I had been there for 35 minutes! I was late getting back from my lunch, got a write up and STILL didn't even get to eat my tacos. Lunch sucked today!"

3. You went to Victoria's Secret today? Cool, what did you buy?


"Yeah, I did but let me tell you how ridiculous the whole thing was. As soon as I got to the mall it was like some holiday was happening and I seemed to be the only one on a global level that didn't know about it! So I get there and the parking lot is packed! After driving around in circles for about 30 minutes, I finally caved to the valet and paid $8 stinking dollars just to get my car parked. So I went in, already slightly perturbed right and then as I'm heading to Victoria's some kid that this woman was walking with in front of me was screaming and yelling for whatever stupid reason, I have no idea, but I'm thinking really? You can't control that? Dude, if my kid EVER and I mean EVER acted like that in public, it would be on because there's just no way I would put up with that. So I start to walk around the dramatic meltdown and the brat throws his stupid soft serve ice cream at me! Now, I don't like calling kids brats, but I'm telling you, this was one bad little boy and I don't think he was over 4 years old, he was pretty young. If today were any indication of what his future was going to be like, he was going to go to prison one day because his mom obviously didn't discipline him at home and that never ends well with kids. Now I have to go to the restroom and get some wet paper towels to wipe off the Picasso looking décor job this kid did on my pants and head to the place I came for in the first place! I finally arrive, half-wet, looking like I had peed on myself and I'm browsing through the racks until I finally find some cute little thing to try on. After slipping this soft silky material over my head, I discover my pants aren't the only thing that were effected by ice cream. My thighs were screaming at me from the mirror and I had to take off my cute little garment and go find the next size up-it was ludicrous! Whatever, I find the thing in my new plus-size and went ahead and took my less-than-happy butt home. I will not go back there for a long time! Oh, I bought this emerald green teddy and a bottle of their fragrance, but that was doing too much for two items."